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Friday, August 2, 2019

my advertisement.

This week we have been learning persuasive writing and had to make our own advertisement.
i chose one about homeless people.  
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 19, 2019 at 11:41 AM

    nice job Crystal its so good to know there are people like you who care so much about homeless people I think you have some very good ideas.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2019 at 11:09 AM

    hi crystal its Ella i like how you care for the homeless people itis amazing ka pai

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  3. AnonymousNovember 22, 2019 at 9:40 AM

    Hello Crystal,
    I am Tara and I'm a Year 6 from Papakura Central School. It's so nice that you care about homeless people and want to help them as much as you can. I like how you added a description to tell us about your work. That way, your audience will have a better idea. Hopefully there will be no more homeless people eventually.

    Have an amazing day,
    Tara

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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post

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